AAAHH you stole my idea lol, guess you beat me to the punch. Great minds think alike. Anyways great poem, don't think i could have wrote any better myself :)

great poem!

I loved the last ending it was like icying on top of the cake. great visual for the subject Of Dracul The Dragon Prince would be happy!!!! GREAT JOB!!!

AWESOM!!! that was bad @$$!!!! i love poems like this

Man, I have to say..I love these type of poems, this one really rocks, I wish I could write one like this. Good work, I will definitely read more. Thanx, Timothy r

schockinly good

Love the play of words, the imagery. 'Repast bread', hehe. Anyways, wanted to say thanks for bringing the copyright issue to light, and you were absolutely right, so everything I named after a song I have renamed. Also, thanks for the comment. Ta.

*shivers* ooo freaky
kendra