Awsome! I don't know what else I can say--you express what you question and feel in this poem so well. Keep it up!

Sound finished to me! Anyway, it's really good, keep writing. (BTW, if she's going to keep treating you like she has been, then you could easily find better!) luv ya! Peace

Sometimes, when I look into your eyes,
I see a frightened, little girl,
Who hides herself behind a shroud of darkness,
Unwilling to let herself into the world.

thats a gr8 verse and a deep poem ,it deseverves the top , marks..

a poem with a real passion i really love your poem lipton;)
Take care girlie,love
SamZzZzz

you're very indecisive... lol. no i'm kidding. i loved it. its really good.
POST MORE POEMS!
<3 bella

hey this can not possibly be your worst poem can it???? its excellent very creative i like it! lol i cant w8 2 check out your other work!!!! 5/5

Great poem.