Yeah, it's a type of peotry. Read a couple like yours... it's very unique. You made a common spelling error for "There"... it's suppose to be "They're" . Besides that, i think it's good.

Aken Sol

I have read poems where u read every so many words after words, and someone on here was creative enough to make a palindrome, which are very difficult especially in poem form. Interesting change of pace from the "goth" style u seem to write regularly in!

thank you for that aken sol i over looked it, its now changed :)

I thought that was cool to read from the bottom to top, definitely unique..I loved it. Tim

Nice poem, unique (which is always a good thing) i've never heard of a palindrome before so yeah it was a nice change from what i normally read. tc. xmollyxx

Briskly falling upon the ground
crisp and broken from our feet
as they're gathered in piles
fun for the children
from red to orange
always changing
always blowing in the wind
Autumn Leaves
always blowing in the wind
always changing
as they're gathered in piles
from red to orange
fun for the children
crisp and broken from our feet
Briskly falling upon the ground
Autumn Leaves

yes i'm sure this is a palindrome poem you can check some more out at
http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/types.html
look for palidrome it will give you some really neat examples I didn't find this untill after i already wrote it. So i'm not 100% originial but its deffintley unique in my book.

your right disregard the last thing about knowing it is a palidrome, its close but no cigar lol.........

Very enjoyable :)

how cool is that? very awesome poem. i liked it lots. fall's one of my fave seasons. keep it up. take care:)