WOW....u are really talented i LOVE IT....had alot of depth to it....

with love

Scooby

I loved the last stanza. i thought it was very deep. i think throughout the poem your trying to convey how difficult it is to be accepted for who you are and the only time people take notice of you is when you act like them, like the masses, the sheep. very deep poem, i really enjoyed it. take care. xmollyxx

Faults always seem to rhyme. Very nice poem.

[Submit this!!!]

Nice, but what is up with all the bracets? Trying to make it look pretty? Haha.

Wowzers, now that's great use of wording! Loved at the brackets, gave a nice tone to it. Great, great, great poem! Damn you have talent.

OMG! I loved this one! It was VERY good! You are so talented! I'm putting you on my favorites! 5/5