I'm sorry, i do like a lot of your work, but I just thought this poem ended badly...sorry brutaully honest i know.

I think I would have to agree with Timothy... it was going well until "Dracula". That it was a vampiric poesy was clear... I think something far less blatant and charged than Vlad as an ending would be perfect. In fact, ending with "a guilty pleasure, my dear..." would be great. Regardless, with that exception, I really enjoyed this poem.