Ok I promise is a promise, I picked this one because no one else has ever commented and its not likely to be read again since its well down on your list an early effort.

Great poem 5/5 lol..... sorry just taking the piss out of this site. You know whats sad is this is a cleaver little gem and who's going to wander upon it. Probably nobody. I could breakdown the poem and pretend to be critical and admiring all in the same pen stroke. I know your bright and I dont need to tell you what you all ready know. Like your second verse your probably to modest to accept it anyway. I wont say I enjoyed the poem, but I'll shed a little tear that it deserved much more attention