jajajajaja.....friggin funny

I've never really been a fan of this style of stop/start random words poetry...but your work does buzz with a powerful energy...maybe you could take on issue and try and smooth it out...y'know use some guile and subtle metaphor...

Be happy n all.

it would be funny if it just was not so true

HELL YA. Really cool and funy but in a way true. Well done

luv it

its aight

It's cute...pretty much says a teenagers life except some parts I didnt get...keep up the good work

WOW so many comments i add on for myself lol y? do i get so much for this shit? n hardly any for the good shit

haha lol!! ok thanx

that poem is awesome, so freekin funny, great job