Just As you are

by Jade Castle   Oct 30, 2004


Dirt on my hands
Dirt on my face Scars on my wrists and I'm so ashamed
but you said come on in come just s you are weary worn and tattered I'll never leave you bruised and battered, so come on in,

You cleansed my hands
You washed my face
you healed my scars
and yet i stand amazed

This is dedicated to my Best friend and the best poet i know Alix Qualls

I know its not that good but i would really appreciate it if you would comment and vote

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  • 19 years ago

    by digiienjc

    hey jade!...i really like ur poems this one is awesome! thnx for commenting on mine
    -nelle-

  • 19 years ago

    by Jade Castle

    Thank you Lou i love your poems there great

  • 19 years ago

    by louise

    i think ur poem is good i really enjoyed it it has a lot of emotion behind it well done good job. lou x x