i looked at ur poem 1st cass i luvd the title but it was a great poem, well done!

i apprieciate the comments thankz everyone!

I really like your poem!!!!

well written!! nice job!

very well written, and touching... you definitely deserved straight fives on this poem, great work! (5/5 in case you hadnt guessed =)! )

i loved thi poem...5/5 ♥ joann

thank you lotz!

Very touching poem.... i loved it... well written and conveyed

I wish we can bRing back the paSt.. anyway, this is a great piece..

The "thy" is random but overall okay.