I need a hug

by Liam   Oct 31, 2004


They take away all the pain
take away the feelings that stain,
stain you're heart for ever more.
All your feelings fell to the floor.
But all I need is a hug,
from you, hold me in your arms.
Never felt so safe,
from all the universe.
The wars around.
Your heart beat, the only sound.
All I need is a hug.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Shædow Poet

    O, that's the cutest poem in some ways, yet brinks on the edge of sadness with some lines... well written.

  • 19 years ago

    by robyn

    i wanted to thank you for commenting on my poems and i think its weird that at this very moment all i need is a hug for those very same reasons.

  • 19 years ago

    by vanessarrr

    very sweet and short. i liked it a lot. this is how i feel most of the times... keep writing. take care:)

  • 19 years ago

    by Mephastophilis

    Are you a mind reader? did you take this from my thoughts? because this is exactly how i feel. i really enjoyed this poem. it was sweet and beautifully written. tc xmollyxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    very sweet and touching poem...take care...

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