Spooky Wooky.
I read it, i like it, Hollow's Eve rocks!!!
4th line,i think u should get rid of "in". But w/e i like it as is, just thought t'll sound even more great w/ that taken care of
Aken Sol

lol ur a freaky dude sometimes jeff....a freaky dude.

i like this one alot! especially the ending, "Just hold your teddy and beware of Freddy"

hehe, that's awesome writing!

great, unique poem. i have not been scared for a looong time now and holloween was pretty much... well, not near scary. anyways, i enjoyed reading it. take care:)

hahaha funny and sick, no offence if it was meant to be sad

wasn't meant to be sad so none taken =) thanks for the comments

well written and it flowed nicely. Good Job.