I agree I think I would add on to that what you have so far is great! Take Care! Brooke 5/5

Its short simple and effective. Sometimes when u try to make a poem longer its forced and becomes something you didnt want it to be. Im glad that you didnt try to force it because it's beautiful as it. 5/5 and thanks for you comment

cool, Short and to the point.

With such a few words the meaning shines bright. I enjoyed that, outstanding!
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