by Stephanie Nov 2, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
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I can't believe you hurt me this bad. |
by Mike G
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Nice poem Steph. The one major piece of advice I can give you is to really tap into your emotions and express it in a way that the reader will feel connected with you. Maybe try using words to describe your feelings more than just coming right out and saying how you feel. I think you have great talent and I look forward to reading more from you in the future. |