i love this poem! it says so much in so few words! keep it up please!

why do i lose after i love....
happy? yeah, your poems sucks so i guess u gotta put others down

HAHA you got that straight girl this poem was exquisite baby and f u c k that dirty mongrel justplainbigfingwanker!

Ha well in the country Im from you spelt it correctly so well done baby plus your write from the heart and the rest of us real poets can see past spelling when reading into the depths of a piece such as this!

Well done darling! Luv your friend Eirisa

thank you elirisa. real poets can see past spelling........