WOW. Brillaint poem. very deep. i really like the use of repetition. its such a sad poem though, really sad and touching. it's horrible when you nice to someone all the time and there're never there when you need them. i've been there. tc. xmollyxx

wow...i didn't expect that at the end....Very good poem...

i like this poem thanks for sharing it keep up the good work

That is sad
what did you base this poem on?

this one isn't from my experiences. this one is from a story a friend told me. the story moved me so i had to write about it.

Wow. I liked this alot. Really descriptive, and just awesome. 5/5

hey that was really good, i went over a few of your poems and I can relate to some of them, it seems as though your are, or really was in love. If so I know what it feels liek to be in love and there not ther for you.