Comments : The man

  • 19 years ago

    by Shy

    WOW 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    wow!!!!!!!!!!! so blooming good i dont no how u do it?

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert

    very well done from what I have see you have alot of potential keep up the writing if you ever need some pointer give me a hollar...

  • 18 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    good. i like how you used what the people were saying. but yeah...great job once again

  • 18 years ago

    by natalie

    I really liked it, its sad though :(

  • 18 years ago

    by Kia

    chilling.... is this true that's an awesome poem written with a lot of emotion great job

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    wow great poem...kinda freaky...but soo true...5/5 excellent!!! luv yas mwah\

    -kayla-

  • 18 years ago

    by M MEM

    Omg, powerful, strong, so very good, nice job