Nice write girl :).... I loved the poem.. but somewhat hard to picture... its summer on my side of the world in Christmas time :(... oh well, I see enough of snow I tv :D its truely beautiful, just like this poem. Keep up the good work and take care.

that was really a breath-taking poem, i guess i did kinda forget christimas can be like that, I love christmas it's a really good time to be with the family, but anywho, the peom was written unbelievably well! keep writing :) x x x x

Awww beautiful hun! =) Very nice. Keep it up and take care!

~Grace

I CANT WAIT FOR CHRISTMAS...lol i swear when it comes to christmas i am 5 yrs old again..lol except i am not excited about the presents its more the FOOD ahaha...=)
You protrayed christmas sooo well it actually gave me memories of when i was like 6 running down at 5 in the morning snooping around...except i am more excited at 17 yrs then i was 7...lol

awsome job

scoobs

I like this poem.
Christmas is my most favorite time of the year.

thank you guys sooo much it feels great to have you guys comment!! you made what was a pretty bad day so far really great!!! thanks so much!

Pretty little Poem!

Good Job!

God Bless ;)

That was beauriful. I loved your vivid descriptions and the feeling you put into this poem.
--Lydia