Comments : The pain and sorrow

  • 19 years ago

    by Ian Robert

    Very impressive :D:D

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather

    WOW, that was an amazing Poem, it made me cry, I hope things have changed. I have learned to not take you life over anything. It is not worth it...there are people out there who care about you, again , i hope things have changed. and great poem
    ~*~Heather~*~

  • 19 years ago

    by Fallen-AS-Angels do!

    I also have attepted suiside and i guess if you feel this depressed again then my e-mail is Nightlich88@yahoo.com

  • 19 years ago

    by ThE1&0nLy

    im so sry that this happened to you i like the way that u put it in a poem format i really liked it *tear tear* im really crying

  • 19 years ago

    by Jade Castle

    OH MY GOSH
    THAT IS SOOO SAD!
    IS THAT TRUE?
    JADE X X

  • 19 years ago

    by creasy

    i just wanted to say that, that was a great poem....i know what your're going through i too wish to die til this day...i almost od but someone caught me.....just keep ya head up and try to get away just dont hurt yourself....if ya need anything just write me.... take care... ~1~...

  • 19 years ago

    by Emily

    this poem was really good, but it wa sconfusing, it seems as if your thoughts are a lil unclear...clean this poem up a lil and it might be the best poem i have read.

  • 18 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    awww sweetie, i know howu feel, u hang in there. im sry bout what happened. if u need to talk u can e-mail me
    bethers_is_my_baby@rock.com
    *~peace and love~*

  • 18 years ago

    by 1

    Awesome poem. good job abt yet sad. hope ur o.k. u kw life can be pretty though but u gotta hang on because life will always go on. hope ur k. take care

    Luv,
    Noziyna

  • 18 years ago

    by heather

    Your poem was absolutely amazin.. i about cried..:( u are so good at writing .. just remember that there are ppl out there that care about you.. i hope ur okay now

  • 18 years ago

    by Ellen

    I found your poem to be truly touching. I think you were strong to make it through everything that you have and I know there was a reason God saved you. he has a purpose for your life and even through this poem, some of your purpose showed. you can really touch people with your writing. I don't know you personally but through your poetry, i was able to emptatize with you to the point that i felt like i knew you forever. keep up the good work and know that, even when you're at your lowest, God has something planned for you so just never give up. great work!

  • 17 years ago

    by keisha

    That poem is really well written and touching.. it made me cry. good job. and im glad that you made it through..so far. i know how you feel though and no im not just saying that.

  • 17 years ago

    by Georgia

    Im so sorry you went through so much pain...i dont no what to say it was such a sad poem i cried while reading it..so well writen..hope you find all the love and happiness you deserve
    xoxoxoxoxox
    love georgia

  • 17 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    Wow. I don't know what to say. I'm sorry really wouldn't matter to what all you have been through. But Im going to say it anyways. You sound like a bright and intelligent women and I hope you find true happiness soon.

  • 17 years ago

    by nihility

    Amazing. Nuff said

  • 16 years ago

    by Izumi

    Monica,here's what I've got to say.....Your poem is emotional and very well written,but it's full of pain that was within you...We all commiserate for you,and belive me I know what you feel...my life isn't sweet as well..I can't express it so good with words what I feel...but no matter how I feel or what I have to go through in life,I still keep my chin up and try to find a better side in life,I try to find the little ray of light that just might exist.....So,keep your chin up,don't be afraid and go forward,don't ever look back...you know you're strong and that's only the first step into being free from your problems,freedom comes when you know what you're worth and you stand up for yourself....So remember that if you need someone to talk to,I'm always there for you...I'll help you in every way I can...

  • 16 years ago

    by Quiet Storm

    I know how you feel i have had multiple suicide attempts and i've been beaten raped and all kinds of things but i realized it's so much to live for. When you get old enough to leave you can do whatever and someone will fill that spot that is so empty. You just have to believe and hold on.