Really sweet poem, full of emotion and feeling xxx alex xxx

You just captured my heart with this piece.
Beautifully penned and the indicisiveness to give yorself to her was wonderfully worded..
Tell me this one time without haste or lust,
is this a love that I can trust?

"Take this part of me that I give to you of my own free will,
for tonight we will love, live life and take time to heal." my favorite part it added emotion to the poem and the ending couldn't be better.

your rhyme and flow was was smoth.

**Ada**
*aBSwaBHiaPL*