beautiful poem chloe...really well written, but very sad...I hope things get ebtetr for you m'love...take care xxx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

this is very well written and a great poem. keep it up!

very sad. i hope things get better for you, and you find some way to ease your pain that isnt destructive to yourself.

Your actually one of my favorites, i guess i did add u da very first time i read your poems, you're very talented, you have always been but this poem, this one poem might be the best, for it has da greatest amount of feeling, since it came staright from the heart... it is indeed sad, i guess i wish i cud get things better for u but u no i cant, Chloe, plz keep ur chin up, u'll get over this...

Best wishes, Zayda

keep up the good work! excellent!

WOW! you are suck a good poet. this poem is awsome. can u read some of my stuff and comment.....5