Beautifully written...I hope your bf reads this one,if he does then i'm sure he his not going to go away from you...take care and keep writing...FIVE>>>

Nice write girl, I can kind of relate to this poem... it triggered some old memories... sometime, you just have to let go... ...I hope you'll find your happiness soon :) take care :)

AWWW that was so good and so sad! I really really liked it :) Good job and keep up the good work. Btw...feel free to check out my poems!

that was so sad and touching!you made the feelins seem so realistic aswell....its as if i could feel your feelins with me here! keepi it up xx