This poem doesn`t suck Erin, if this is how you see things in your world, The situation might suck, but never your writing of it. You once agin have written beautifully, please continue , I love your wok. Love, Tim

Wok?..please forgive my typing skills..I meant work of course..lol.

Yes, I must echo Tim...this does not suck! It comes straight from your heart and conveys the pain you are feeling. Keep up the good work!

this poem is really good! i think you should keep the original title.

i don't think this sucks at all! i have no idea why you would say that. i think that you should leave the title how it is. this poem is very deep and expressive, i love it!

Hey, this is really good...i can kind of relate to this...i hope everything is well...Keep on writing and take care...thanx for the commentz...it meanz a lot to me..
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

I can relate. I really liked this one too. it was beautiful, and it had some true emotions in it. I love your poems, keep on writing.
SatuzKa

your poem reminds me of what im
going threw right now

AHH I LOVED IT.. im in the same situation right now..