An excellent poem Kumar.. i'm so sorry about your heartbreak.. you will find the girl for you one day, believe me. She is out there.. and she's searching for you as well. Please keep your head up and keep up the great writing! Take care!

~Grace

This was an excellent poem... it was captivating... Hope everything turns out better... Keep up the good work and take care
Angel

This is a paradox of reality i must say. Inspirational and challenging work. love it. Beautiful recap too!!!!

Ohhhh, this reminds me, you have been out of circulation lately dont you think? lol :D

wow thats amazing
great work

This poem was the best...Keep up the awesome work!

awwwww....that is so touching!!!!
i LOVE the way u end ure poem...i almost cried really...ive never really felt so torn while reading a poem...
""Go and tell her,now she doesn't live in one heart but two,
coz ever since she has gone"My Heart Is Broken Into Two" "
these lines are really very touching...
u know,my name means "clouds"....if i were actually the clouds and if things were in my hands i wudve given her back to u...lol.... onli if life were as we want it to be!!

love hurts 5>>>

wow! this is truly creative! i love it!

wow that is beautiful!! keep it up!

thats sad and touching and its just really good

Lovely! so touching. i can feel the words, dear.
great job as usual.
take care, bye
bharti