I felt the depth and pain in your words...I saw some of your comments on Maybeths work and was compelled to come and see some of your poetry...am so far very impressed! You have a greatly unique style which i have a lot of time and respect for...this poem in itself has told me a story that brought tears to my eyes, you can do better hun and your best off without her in your life, you deserve someone who will treat you with that same love and respect...
Great write!
Eirisa

Thank you, yes i am moving on with my life now, i am sorta seeing a nice person right now, i am glad that you enjoyed all my peices, i am glad that i commented on Maybeths work now, for it has lent me another eye to see what my writing and comment about them.

Mate !

great job u did,but when i read this part :

......If you are different from all the rest then why
why is the world filled with people like you and me.........

u had better put the word I insted of me ( people like u and I ) u know wut i mean,just to keep the sound up : )

its just i felt it needed the I ,

Peace,
Darla

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i came back to read this poem again i just love it. i love all of your stuff your amazing