Comments : Time goes by

  • 16 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Amazing poem hun...really loved the first verse...well done xxxxxx

    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCareAlwaysxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Pauly D.

    Sitting by the waterside, wind blowing through my hair,
    a crimson tear is blown away, by the cold November air.
    My hopes have crashed and my world has burst,
    darkness is waiting, for death; I thirst.

    All I can say is "Wow"

  • 16 years ago

    by ~*Snow queen~*

    this is a great poem. i am amazed. keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by jamie25

    i have to agree with everyone ,...all i can say is WOW! you have an amazing talent! keep up the good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by spunk

    oh my god, that was amazing!!! i love it. i, my self enjoy reading and writing dpressing poems, and yours i must say is one of the best yet, i love it keep it up, check out mine!!!
    -spunk-

  • 16 years ago

    by TwistedBeauty87

    Wow...Excellent Poem:D...
    Keep it up... 5/5...
    ~!~Luv Sedusha~!~

  • 16 years ago

    by courtney

    wow... that was fantastic. sad but very well done
    ~cort~

  • another great poem! keep up the good work! i agree with everyone when they say how great it is! happy thanksgiving!