His love

by nicole   Nov 10, 2004


He knew her every move
he watched her for so long,
he was so obsessed with her
he even wrote her a song.

he followed her around the school
he watched her on the beach,
he was so obsessed with her
he was like a leach.

he finally got the courage
to ask her to the dance,
all he wanted from her
was just a little romance.

he asked her to the dance
and she turned, laughed at him,
he was so depressed
he felt like one big sin.

he went home crying,
went into the kitchen and took a knife,
went to his room
and took his life.

*plz comment id love to know what u all think* i really dnt think i like this one

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  • 19 years ago

    by nicole

    thanx for that i will do x

  • 19 years ago

    by Infinite*

    I like the idea of this poem, perhaps you could add in some more descriptive words to help convey the emotions. i like the repetition used :)

  • 19 years ago

    by confusion

    good work :) liked the sudden ending

    lu -x-x-x-

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