Great Poem! I never usually suggest anything, because a submited poem, like it or not, is how the artist intends its surveilance...but I just, simply, wish you had ended it a little differently. I dont know what!---But something more...final. I just wish it had a little more tang on the lips of a full taste.

Still it is very good!

I am completely open to interrogation, if you think it sucks, tell me why... Everyone can improve, and I am no exception

i think this poem was great it is hard to go on sometimes and sometimes you feel you have to put on that fake smile, but it is good to get it all out on paper. great poem i hope to read more soon.

Truly another great poem. Damn ur good!

LOVED IT!!

the simplicity of this is awesome. I love the short lines.. they pack a lot of punch. great poem.

i really enjoyed this. It was short, simple, but very direct and to the point. It was an easy read, always a +, so over all i would say Good Job :).

Great poem, I can relate to it, keep up the good work
Take care
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Wow, I feel like this poem is about me. I can really relate. Well done.

love it.......all I can say

Wow another amazing poem Jason

brilliant!