OUCH! Very weel written.. a harsh reality that needs to not be hidden away like many want to do with it.

Great work, again, Jason! Can't wait to see more from you!

WOAH!!! crazy awesome!! Definately a thinker!! POWERFUL and dark and mysterious! Just powerful words! great job bud!!!!
luv elizabeth

Brilliant and leaves you thinking. Great poem keep writting and i'll keep reading.

WOAH.

---is all i can say.

Please, Buddie, can we chat some. I like your poetry. I hope your not 'literally' contemplating damnation...I'll e-mail you. But ur poem rox dude. Keep writing!

God Bless ;)

Mint!!!i really enjoyed the wordin of this peom. i love the image that u are able to build up!it was very good #5# thanx for ur comment too Luce xx

Wow Jason... very deep poem... I really liked it, keep on writing.. you have great talent to get where you want to get.

you have a very good reason for this poem to be one of your favorites. it's one of mine now!
ciao,blarg

wow! this one has a lot of emotion, i love it!

Awesome poem, very surprising, but it just flows. Great job, keep up the good work. Peace

WOAH....So well writen and loads to think about. It was very stricking after I started reading threw it. After reading this poem you will have alot to think about. Peace and Hope *Tori*

The material seems...unoriginal, but your talent in writing is apparent.
Technically, this poem is awesome.