you said my poem was a wow...no this poem is a WOW WOW lol. I couldnt' stop reading it. The descrptions were very detailed. I had great visuals while reading it. What a dark picture you painted here. Sad how these things really do happen though. Anyways I couldn't give you anything less than a 5 because it really does deserve highter than that though. GREAT JOB!
Wow. That is so sad! Is it true? That is horrible that there is some one out there like him. I'm really sorry about her if it is true. I'm thinking it is because the writing is so great. Thats nice to write a poem in her memory. Very greatly written! definatly a 5!