Comments : Jane Doe--Her Murder

  • 17 years ago

    by Jacki

    you said my poem was a wow...no this poem is a WOW WOW lol. I couldnt' stop reading it. The descrptions were very detailed. I had great visuals while reading it. What a dark picture you painted here. Sad how these things really do happen though. Anyways I couldn't give you anything less than a 5 because it really does deserve highter than that though. GREAT JOB!

  • 17 years ago

    by Johnny Marlin 2

    wonderful poem, excellent wording, it paints a horrible picture in my head, many guys are that disturbed, I hate society... Keep writing so I can keep reading

  • 17 years ago

    by Libra2068

    This is so great...Hope it's not true though...Keep writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by Taylor

    Great Poem I love it! it's really sad and horrible but mystifying at the same time keep it up!

    Love, Taylor

  • 17 years ago

    by Kara !

    I'm a little speechless. The imagery is so vivid for the brutality mentioned, but it wouldn't work without it. Just.. well amazing. Don't ever stop writing.

  • 17 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Omg....that is so incredibly sad...I could picture all of it, which is scary....amazing job Andrea...Loved it a lot...take good care xxxxxxx

    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx

  • 17 years ago

    by Lance Hardy

    Insanely good Andrea. I could see it all in my head as I was reading it and am amazed how perfect the descriptions and everything is. Great job.

    Lance

  • omg :o( that is sooo sad...but you wrote it very well..keep up the awesome writting^_^ 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by loosing grip

    omg that was SOOO SAD, yet SOOO BRILLIANT!!! well done girl, u write so well, keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by jescelle

    another good one girl, dont forget to write to me!

  • 17 years ago

    by Incognito

    That was so sad *tear* and wonderful too.

  • 17 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Amazingly written, amazing tale, amazing poet, amazingly sad, and amazingly true in the world today.

  • 17 years ago

    by Luvmeluvr

    Holy cow...that is a crazy poem! It is very well written though. Great work. Dark and morbid. Gave me the creeps.

  • 17 years ago

    by SHYSTY23KO

    Wow. That is so sad! Is it true? That is horrible that there is some one out there like him. I'm really sorry about her if it is true. I'm thinking it is because the writing is so great. Thats nice to write a poem in her memory. Very greatly written! definatly a 5!

  • 17 years ago

    by jennifer

    Wow is the only word that sums tis poem up, gave me chills reading it your an awesome writer

  • 17 years ago

    by blarg

    i'd give it a 10' if i could...sigh i guess a 5 will have to do. great writing
    love blarg

    p.s. thanx for all your comments on my poems!! i really appreciate it!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Conner

    Very good poem. Although I don't prefer the bad guy getting away. I like the happy endings. haha Anyways it was an awesome poem. Take care.
    -Conner

  • 17 years ago

    by Broken

    that was written very well, andrea...but its a little disturbing and morbid...but it kept me glued to the screen with every line...great job !!!!!!!!! i could picture everything..

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*Snow queen~*

    this is a great, sad, disturbing, true poem. I mean ugh. just one word can say it. Amazing

  • 17 years ago

    by Ophelia

    i love it...but i hope it isn't true.

    luv ya lots,
    *autumn*