What a pretty picture... So pretty, so pretty. So dead but so pretty, so pretty, so pretty.

This is so good that I just had to come read it again.....

Dark, and yes horror, woawhz.. never really read poetry like this... interesting.. and leaves my mind saying OOooOO!!

gr8

take care girl,
CyN

omg thats a wonderful poem! it's just awesome and very very sad, i don't see how people could do something like that to someone, it bugs me but his was very weel writen and thanks for commenting on my poem it means a lot to me i like you imputs since you are a really good writer, i would really like you imputs on Pimperella (all four plz) cause i don't know how good they really are. take care always,

~lil slam~ bye bye

ah, I can't believe I didn't comment on this one either! lol, the poem was well written, very creative, dark and deep, i absolutely loved it. xxxx

what a poem. damn ~ you have alot of talent. keep them comming

Wow, this was really good! I really like your writing! Keep it up! (",)

~Krissy

~ beautiful lines, amazing poem! :-0
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

Wow, that was really good, you have so much talent keep writing xx

so sad but an awsome poem! and thanks for your comments
xxxChristinaxxx

Good job!

Thanks for the comments on my poems.

This poem is really really upsetting. I mean dont get me wrong it was wondrful but it was scary of thinking of it. I mean I pictured it in my mind!

Oh ya I forgot to tell u . Even though I have read this poem a billion times (lol) I wanted to ask u... where do u get ur talent at????? lol Great poem once again

wow, yet another great poem, I think im going to read all of your work now. You are a evil little girl, Ive read 2 of your poems and in both of them people end up dead

omg thats so good, keep up the good work xox sam

i love ur work alot very meaningful n dark

Wow, that sends a shiver down your spine.

it was coo

Another masterpiece from the great poet. I loved it. You are so talented. I wish I had half the talent you did and then maybe my poems would turn out worthwhile.
5/5
Jenn.

AWSOME!