That was really well written, and really sweet. You're a really talented writer, keep writing :]
Thanks for commenting on my poem too, i know im not that great at writing.

Ann

Excellent poem. Keep on writing... p.s. check out mine if you have a chance

good job

Very wonderful poem Olivia and thank-you for commenting on mine greatly appreciated

Sara, this piece was so passionate and very loving:) I loved it.. 5/5.. Keep it up;D Check some of mine:).. Take Care...

~!~Love grows all the time~!~

You really write straight from the heart, so pure and sincere. Your words truly capture the essence of love. Good work.