Wow. This is good, yeah definitely. Well written, i liked the flow of it. Good writing :D

Keep it up,

xox, PorteR

PS - thx for the comment on my poem, much appreciated =D

I sat for speechless for a minute after reading this. I adore the imagery in this. It sets up a great picture.

Wow your good. I loved it :D. Abz xxxx

SUCH a good poem! Great work!

good job well written keep it up
Mandi

That was great..forgot to comment earlier. I really like your stuff!!

§The Only Rose In This Desert§

Omg another excellent poem..ur really good..Keep it up!

ahhhhhhhh! beyond words. the last line was like the.... icing on the cake.

lovely