Bad poem... i don't think so...it was a perfect love poem...it had everything in it...humor,emotion,desire to name a few...Great write and FIVE all the way...
take care and keep writing...

tisn't bad, I think it's tres bien. keep up the good work hun! x :)

Hey, that's pretty good for having written it quickly! Take care!

~Ciao Lipton

Hey there, i agree with Lipton.. It's good. I wouldn't even be able to write if i had to write a poem quickly =p Take care

I love it and I agree with Kumar!

not bad... good poem right here... thanx for the comment... much love always... letishia

i think this is a good poem, it explains love all at once, which is good, thanks for commenting on mine keep in touch.

great poem!!! not at all bad.... no exactly wat it feels like 2 be in that situation...thanks 4 commentin on mine xoc keep writin ~samz~

hey, thats a great poem righ there, i agree with everybody, that was an awesome love poem. take care, bye

dats a wicked poem i can so relate
keep up da gud wrk keep in touch