I wanna be with U ! (NEW) !

by Sweet As Sugar   Nov 14, 2004


Before you all read this .. just wanna let u know that i wrote half of this, not all of it ! but i just love the words !! they are soo amaazing ! they make me wanna read them over and over again !! check it out! ur gonna luv it !
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I don’t know how to start .
And I don’t know how to end ..
I try but I can't seem to get myself
to think of anything but you..
You are all I am asking for ..
And I am not going to ask for more ,,
I just want to be with you ..
If only for a night ,,
to be the one who's in your arms to hold you tight ..
There is nothing more to say ,,
there's nothing else I want more than to feel this way!

So ill hold you close to me ..
So u could just kiss my pain away ..
You are my night , my day , and my dream come true .. What else can I say ?
See how beautiful it is ..
Just to be like this ..

I ask again and again ..
I want to be with you ..
Forever and ever !

. So call my name
Take my hand
Make my wish
Baby, your command?

I ask one more time and pray all day ..
I just want to be with you ..
I want to be .. I want to be … with you!!
..

P.S please send me your comments!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Breeeezie

    So ill hold you close to me ..
    So u could just kiss my pain away ..
    You are my night , my day , and my dream come true .. What else can I say ?
    See how beautiful it is ..
    Just to be like this ..

    aww i love that part 100/100 on it all

  • 19 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    So cute, ahh i love it!. =)
    Excellent!

    Take care,
    Kalah

  • 19 years ago

    by *lost and alone*

    damn girl that is good

  • 19 years ago

    by chansta

    amazing work *** i no what ur going thru haha ** thanks for commenting on mine too.

  • 19 years ago

    by Alexis

    *stnads up and claps * Very Good !!!

    *Alexis