i greatly appreciate anyone who takes the time to let me know what they think of my poem!!!

Well I came to read it because of the post you put up...I normally don't go to the sadness and depression parts unless directed. This is a very good poem!! I was very much impressed. No work needs to be done to it. Leave it alone. I think when you write some thing it should stay the way you wrote it, because in my eyes that is really the way you meant it. Anyway awesome I shall give it a 5!! Take care...

thank you!

Awesome poem, I totally agree with Natalie, keep up the good work...

thanks jason!

this is a wikid poem!

Greta job, it is one of a kind! Great job!

i think it's fine as it is. I really like this poem and it's the truth which makes me like it even more. 5/5

Wow....That's really awesome!

thanx every1!!!!

i dont think anything needs to be changed in this poem! i love it just the way it is, great job!

... Amazing. You did a wonderful job.

This is a really great poem, I can relate to parts of it, good job

I like it ...It does carry lots of sad charge though...but it is nice one.
Alya

Awesome poem! Keep up the good work! Take care.
-Conner

This to me reflects on life, as this is how I see life - and society in general. A wonderful poem. I really enjoyed reading it.

THANK YOU EVERY1 FOR COMMENTING.

thanks everyone for commenting!

I really liked this poem, good job!

(sorry, i just noticed in one of your comments on my poem u requested that i comment this, sorry so late, i'v been on vacation)

This is very deep, very pure. i loved it! great job!!!