Comments : Simply Morbid

  • 19 years ago

    by SCARECROW

    It's quite good, but remember, you don't always have to rhyme. Also, death is quite beautiful, and Satan IS a saviour. But that's just my opinion and we're all entitled to our own. I'm just trying to give you an honest somment. Still, well done.

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    this is really good! its different and creative. great job!

  • 19 years ago

    by Johnny Marlin 2

    Awesome poem, keep up the good work... P.S. thanks for the comments and messages.

    Jason

  • 19 years ago

    by Broken

    that was excellent!!!!! ah, i could picture everything ....very imaginative and very creative....keep up the beautiful work!

  • 19 years ago

    by Johnny Marlin 2

    Hey Shana, you just bumped my poem down a spot on the Dark/Fantasy section.... Thanks a lot..
    jk... good job, and keep on writing

  • 19 years ago

    by Shana

    o seriously lol I never check, I wonder what its at I must see lol, hehe, someone will probly vote me down anyway like people ussually do to take my spot lol