Last Love Song

by Liam   Nov 15, 2004


Giving it my last try,
Giving my whole heart away,
Try to wipe the tears away I cry
but more just flow.

Just one last try,
one last love song to bring you back,
rewind that knowledge i lack.
Think i'll just let go.

one last try,
one last song,
where does my heart belong.

think i'll just quit.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Bre Monique

    I liked the poem a lot. It was simple yet held a lot of meaning.

    "Just one last try,
    one last love song to bring you back,"

    Those were my two favorite lines. My only critique would be to get rid of the last line. Other then that, it was wonderful.

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