Comments : My Final Plea

  • 17 years ago

    by Johnny Marlin 2

    Another awesome poem, I'm sorry to hear about your friend, keep on writing them, you know I have enjoyed them all. Morbid or not, it doesn't matter. haha, take care

  • 17 years ago

    by Andrea

    that is so sad! very good poem tho, keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by olivia

    thtis hit a nerve in me 4 personal reasons .. i lost mybro thru a suicde he shot himself .. but ur poem was very good .. amazing job

  • 17 years ago

    by jennifer

    Wow very deep, very sad, I can relate my best friend hung himself... I nkow what this is like thank-you for having the courage to write it

  • 17 years ago

    by SHYSTY23KO

    Wow, it made me cry : ( I know how you feel. I lost a friend too. She hung herself because all the people that were mean to her. Can you please comment on it? its called 'my friend kim' I'm really sorry you lost your friend. I know it hurts terribly. But do know that he's in a better place, looking down on you and wouldn't want you to be sad. ~Lots of love~ *take care*

  • 17 years ago

    by Victoria

    Truly an awesome poem, I enjoyed reading it. Although very sad and everyone feels like no1 cares..at times..not a good feeling at all. I love your poems and I'll comment more :) Do peek at mine if you don't mind ;) -Much love and hope-Tori*

  • 17 years ago

    by blarg

    you are a very gifted writer!!! don't ever stop writing cuz i want to hear what you have to say!! love forever, blarg!

  • 16 years ago

    by ~Bloodied&Broken

    WOW! Thats AWSOME! i love the idea and very well written. I dont like some of the lenghts of the lines too short or too long because it can feel jubled and harder to flow- but an awsome job all the same!
    luv ya!
    kt

  • 16 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    awesome poem, i like the first & second stanzas... very good!

  • 16 years ago

    by miss scooby

    OMG, that was such a sad sad poem, I LOVED IT THOU. It's sooooo sad. I can't get over it. You did such an AMAZING job writing it. it was one of those poems that you wish was like a story. wow you did an GREAT JOB it flowed really well, and kept my attention the whole way threw.....5/5
    take care
    Scooby

  • 16 years ago

    by Ashlee Nicole

    I love that poem..I'm gonna tell everyone about that! Amazing!
    -Ashlee-

  • 16 years ago

    by Natalie84

    That was very well written though it was so sad. I have problems writing of death and suicide. I have tried and only written one....I don't like it though. Anyway very good....hope you are doing ok....Keep it up....Happy Holidays!

  • 16 years ago

    by SmileeItsBritt

    haha you said you wanted a suprise when you got home from school. haha SUPRISE! Very well written 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Minkus

    That's a great poem, written with feeling and a pattern. Keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    wow exellent job on this poem so sad about ur friend! keep writing. if you get a chance check out some of mine! Thanx!

  • 16 years ago

    by Chad Reamer

    This was really good 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    I liked it. It was well written. The only thing I would change about it is that the flow is a bit awkward at the end of the first line and some other ones too, so if you would change it a bit then it might be better. But over all a very good poem, keep on writing.
    SatuzKa

  • 16 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    Thats a really great poem i really like it alot...but ur a little heavy on the literal rhyming....cool it a lil...maybe every few lines or something. but i can really imagine the story behind it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kalika

    I liked it, but the rhyming sounded a little forced sometimes, but other than that it was an awesome poem.....I'm sorry someone you know killed himself, that is terrible.....

    Kalika

  • 16 years ago

    by Amanda

    It is very deep but very good! Keep it up :)