excellent poem. this is very well-written. great job!!

Amazing.... Absolutely amazing, keep it up

You have some serious talent. Keep writing.

What a Good Poem!

That was beautiful, my brother was born premature with his cord wrapped around his neck, he lived tho, which i am so thankful for, but i had a cuzin who died with his cord wraped around his neck, it was so sad, and now much uncle (the babys dad) has been depressed every sice, but nonetheless that was a beatiful poem

omg this is an awesome poem one of the best ones i have read yet, keep up the good work i would like to read more from you in the future, keep in touch.