Differant, i like it. So very true. The internet is making people lazy. You can just sit on your butt, and order almost anything. Keep up the good writing. Check Out "Dying to Be Born", if you have a chance.

Jason

P.s. Spelling error. Your, instead of Tour

ya i was'nt to happy about this poem, i knew there was something a bit wrong about it, I will improve on making parts of it a little more clear... Thankyou for your thoughts about this poem... :P Maybe ritalin may help your weird mood
j/k

i like it too! it is very true.

Don't change anything it's awesome:) And your right you do not have to go crazy cut back and excersise it works I lost ten punds in two months

HEY!!!! Where You Been? You Need To Write More... HAHA, i'm bored.