Comments : Eternal Sleep

  • 19 years ago

    by Bobby Brownlie

    All I have to say is that this poem describes how depressed my ex has made me and the pain that she has caused me is something i don't want to see anyone go through. I am sorry to all my friends that read this but I had to write how I have been feeling, because it was balling up inside and I had to let it out. As great as the temtation is I am not going to cut myself because when I was going to do it a friend seen me and is walking me through this rough time, and is helping me get through my pain.
    again I am sorry please read and comment thanks
    -bobby-

  • 19 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow that was Good

  • 19 years ago

    by Molly Elizabeth

    awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...
    you have to stop being so sad!! this is a really good poem, but im just afraid for you now!! Don't do anything bad ok?? I would be really sad!! You have ppl who still care about you!! I'm here for you if you need me, sorry i haven't been online to check my email!!
    i hope to hear from you soon!!
    love ya,
    -Molly

  • 19 years ago

    by Molly Elizabeth

    o, good,... i just read ur comment and im glad u wouldn't do anything!!!!!

    I loVe yA lotS ForEVer!!
    -Molly

  • 19 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    Awww... Bobby everything will work out soon.. I promise!!!

    Thank you for your comment. I'm sorry about the pain you've been forced to go through, but you've gotta keep your head up. Things will get better, believe me, they always do! =)

    Take care and keep writing!

    - Happy Holidays! -

  • 19 years ago

    by Brittany

    wow... this poem describes how i feel! its amazing... very deep! i love it! awsome job keep writing.... i hope ur ok.. good luck :)
    Britt

  • 19 years ago

    by brittany

    This poem is very sad bobby.I really hope u didnt do this.She's not worth ur tears or ur life.Prove to her that u don need her.

  • naww this is soo sad:'( Very well done once again..excellent wording..I could feel this poem well..Keep on writting..ur poems rock!
    Shanney