not to bad. rate me/ comment to.

You know...i'm so envious. You don't know what i've gone through. It's a beautiful poem. Good job.

This was good... I liked your other one better... But keep it up.. I thought it was good.. Take Care
Angel

This is an interesting journey through the life of a relationship (especially the wishful thinking of a dying relationship) portrayed in a novel manner. Good work. :)

hiya! wow your poems are very good, the writing style to this is great! im gonna carry on reading neways take care and carry on doing what your doing!! xxx

hey thanks for reading my poem. i liked this poem it was very nice. you have a great talent and you write very well. you got a 5 from me. GREAT JOB!!!!
take care
-bobby-

Hi Sarah,I think it's very good and you express yourself well.Keep writing

This is a realy nice poem!:D I like it..;) Your good to..;) But my poem is not true..:P I just made it up!..:)

Hey, i like that....i read it and thought of my bf...it made me smile...thanx :oD
~§unny~

awesome! i loved it! truly great! keep in touch!
lexi lou

Another good one, what can I say.