Nice ending, I enjoy the transitions and rhyme. I could see one of those bands singing it. [one of the popular ones]

Luke, good Poem! I dont recall whether I rated/commented on this poem.y.e.t.so I will find out momentarily.

[psssst...check out my 'cuties''putsie' poem]

cute poem...

Great poem; I can see how your writing always has a dark edge to it- yeah, I do that too. This poem brings out a lot of struggle for the narator. Is it true?

thanks for the comment

what a great poem, great rhyming!!

God Bless
Love Heather