That was a very sad story. Nice job I liked it

thanks for the comments... there was a similar poem like this

Another amazing poem by you, m'love Nick...It flowed really well and the use of words was great and the rhymes were flawless...You did an amazing job, deff one of the bests I've read by you...but you know, you still are innocent, it's those guilty for damaging you...I'm so sorry about your life...I only pray and hope that things get better for you hun...love you muches babe xxxxxxxxxx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

Another amazing poem by you, m'love Nick...It flowed really well and the use of words was great and the rhymes were flawless...You did an amazing job, deff one of the bests I've read by you...but you know, you still are innocent, it's those guilty for damaging you...I'm so sorry about your life...I only pray and hope that things get better for you hun...love you muches babe xxxxxxxxxx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

oops sorry

thank you death, stevi and sarah, i really enjoyed reading your comments love you all

That was really good. It brought tears to my eyes.

that was a great poem im so sorry that this happened to and i hope ur ok now . keep writting

o my gosh i have just read a few of ur poems and u have a great t alent i wish that i could write like u. ur poemsr really heartfelt and i feel for u im sorry for the things that happened to u i only pray that u r ok and things go better for u .
caring reader
, drea

thanks alyssa and drea love you guys
-UnImportant

omg this is sooo soo sooo sad..lol I just can't believe it..I love the ending..And I'm sry!! You have an awesome talent and this poems rocks! 5/5 for sure! Keep up the awesome work!! ^_^

thanks shannon, thanks worthless really apprecainted..
Love you guys

this is a great poem, very well written. Great job. keep it up. stay strong.

this is a great poem, very well written. Great job. keep it up. stay strong.

thanks emily

hey...wow that was a really good poem..but very sad...i've gone through and read quite a few of your poems and there amazing...look forward to reading more

Katie

Thanks Katie
-Nick

i hope that isnt true- its so sad :( but it was a great poem :)

i love it mate......im so sorry did this really happen???? can yo check out some of mine??? luv ya alwayz mate

Thanks faded Kiersten, and yolande
Im sorry but It is true..
Take care
-Nick