"Im dying inside
My heart ripes in two
All the time I run and hide
From the people just like you"

A really nice poem, i especially like ^. It just explains so much.
Take Care

xx - Kalah

Excellent poem :) Thank you for your comment, it meant a lot to me. And I'm sure your sister feels the same way.. ;) take care!

great poem, flows so well, keep up the great work, and stay stong :)

lu -x-x-x-

I just want to say you that your poems are great!expecally this one!and i add you on my favorite list!

i also agree with kalah, those lines are awesome.... 5/5

I really like this one. This seems like one that I could have written myself. You have lots of talent. I am going to check out more of yours This had great flow.
With love, K. Kristina

thanks all of u..Your comments mean so much to me...since I'm young I don't know whether I can write or if I just suck...so thanks a tons! All of u inspire me and I am so grateful ^_^
Thanks
Shanney

Yeah, so like this is quality work, and without trying to sound old and wise...for your age, it is a very balanced piece that seldom falls into the well worn cliche most young women of your age use. The flow could maybe use some work..like when i read it out loud it seemed to need some syllabic editing if you know what i mean...but yeah...bold effort

And thanks for the comment on my poem.

GREAT POEM....i loved it...you should really keep writin...

'Tears pour from my eyes
Don’t know what is wrong
Wondering why I’m the only one that cries'
i love that!it sounds really personal but still something people can relate to. another excellent poem 5/5 xxx

aw that was so good! Thanks for commenting on one of poems, i appreciate it a lot! -K

Aww..Don't Cry!..

Chris

Cry**

Chris

VERY GOOD!

wow wicked poem i can really relate 2 this i lv ur stuff! xxxxxxxxxxx

awesome job. its definately a 5. write more like this.

That woz another great poem, thanx for the comments on mine, don't be scared to cry. Em xx 5/5