Nothing against the vote of two, I don't mind, but... Why do feel it is a two? Just curious, I wrote this in about two minutes anyway... ANYONE FEEL LIKE CRITIQING!!! TELL ME IT SUCKS, I DON'T CARE!!!!!!!!!

Very nice...Good Job Jason! 5/5

i like it a lot...a true writer would understand where u r getting at ya know??? i enjoyed it...keep it up and i am glad that u r not leaving yet. there is a lot out there for you. good luck

Wow! That was awesome man.. Nice poem..

WOW jason for writing this in a short time i really liked it, and i am glad it's not true, as for the 2 i definately wouldn't have rated it that, its clearly not worth a 2 .....but much better.
well i looke forward to reading more of your work...
take care
***with smiles***
Scooby

Awwwww....... that's sad! Unfortuanatly no one ever knows what kind of impact they make, read Lipton's poem "What if?" and you'll see what I mean. Keep truckin', and keep your head up! Feel free to e-mail me if you need/want to, I know sometimes it's easier to confide in complete strangers. Anyway, peace!

BTW, it really is an awesome poem! Keep writing!