wow...very creative! love the metaphors..did i spell that right? lol
xoxo

That last poem REALLY got to me!! I loved this one!! it's GREAT!!! Keep it up
BaByE XxxX-Cath

thank you very much

Excellent poem..I really liked it:) Keep on writing, and you have anytime check mine:p.. again awesome work:D..

~!~Angel Guide...Sedusha~!~
**~God Bless~**

Wonderful poem, absolutley wonderful!

Kalah

"we can love whomever
and kill which we create..."
disturbingly lovely. i liked this poem, i especially liked your choice of vocabulary and symbolism. good job

I also loved this last line. Disturbing and unsettling but strangely empowering. This is a great piece.