This is a wonderful poem...absolutley wonderful. I loved reading it, you are truely a great writter. Keep it up!

Take Care
xx - Kalah

Yeah i gotta recount Bobs comment, not to patronise you for being young and linking your skill as a writer to this....but for your age you are most skilled..

I would recommend you read more classic poets...or just well known modern writers like Brain McCabe.........he taught me a thing or two about rhyme and flow...and thats besically all your poem needs work on...the thoughts and passion are already there...and thats something you cannot learn..

Bold Effort.

thank you for all the comments...it means A LOT for a girl who never thought she would amount to n e thing.loves

to read somthing and it relate to you its kind of scary what you wrote is really deep and preety darn good

I like the way you created these situations, which are very real, excellent work! easily a 5

I like this poem alot. Not many poems address many issues in one shot. Also it is about something that makes you think... good job!
With love, K. Kristina

Wow =) This...is so true! This is..really GREAT! You did an awesome job hun! Wonderful Job! And thanks for giving out this great message to everyone :)

Take Care, and Thank you for the kind comment on my poem.

-Jessica x

Great job! Sometimes it's wonderful to be different...other times it hurts. But your right God made us in his own unique way, and no matter what horrors we go through, he will always be there to help. Awesome!

God Bless

great work hunz loved it :D

~ nice one!
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit