Very powerfully done. Great job!

haha i love the ending. this is good. i relate i had this friend who was really beautiful rich and popular and she always hurt me and put me down and things of that matter and after our friendship was ended it was a happier time for me but she never changed. i actually have poems about her on this site called "stupid ho" and "we are over" u should check them out.
oh and thanks for the comment i find u to be perdy talented as well.

Hey, thanks for your comment :-) you're a really good writer as well! keep up the good work!
*two thumbs up*
-Leanne-

aw thats sad but its well written!! You tell it well!

Well I lost my best friend over a guy. The sad part is though, she left me after the guy left me. What is that supposed to mean? I needed her there for me when he left, but she left too. So sometimes you never really know who your true friends are.

hey again, i like this poem, i know people that do that kind of crap and crush on someone so much and don't see a friends help or any thing ne more so great job with it!

I really like this poem. A similar situation happened to me in the fifth grade, it was ridiculous! How your "friend" could let a boy come in between your friendship is beyond me. But i'm glad that you finally saw that she didn't deserve a friend like you. I'll r8 it a 5/5. So very well written! Hey Kal, thank u SOOOOOOOO MUCH 4 the load of comments! I always luv hearing from you! Yeah, i'm doin ok, just the normal depression phase, ya know? :P I'll probably email u sumtime! How are u doin? Listen, if u leave a comment and i don't answer back, I PROMISE i'll answer back Sunday cuz i'm gonna spend this weekend with one of my favorite relatives...and the computer he used to have is the one he gave to my family! So I won't be on P&Q until Sunday. Well, I'll type ya as SOON AS I CAN! Plz take care, Kal, I'ma miss hearin from you! Waaaaah...So Much Luv and Loads of Happiness and Heaps of Peace, //ari\\