hey this is a good poem i like it alot we havn't talked in a while but i hope things r going good for you , keep up the good work k,

~Lil Slam g~

Thanks^.^

Why write it when you could say it and not be afraid

Pretty good

Omg... I totally love your poem because it soo ... unexplainable.. the good sentence fluency, the good choices of words....the mood.. the settings... amazing....you are a good writer... and I hope you really know that deep down in your heart, and you will keep on writing... keep it up with the amzing job you have done!